FREE WRITING ACTIVITY

This is a free-writing exercise. Write a paragraph (not exceeding 200 words) on any topic you like. Please be serious about this writing activity as I need to know exactly your personal style of writing. Do not cut and paste - I need to read a genuine piece of your own writing. You can start writing below.

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Looking back at those years ,what reminds me the most was the first week of school. Stepping into this school unwillingly on the very first day of school with no familar faces I knew was horrible.With no friends to talk to , to gossip to, was indeed boring for the first day .As I am an anti social girl , I did not approach anyone. So for the first few days of school was just going to school unhappily , sat alone at the corner and thought of the days I had with best friends in primary school . But the worst was yet to come , when my teacher suggested us to do groupwork together with our classmates.

I sat at the corner looking helplessly, not knowing what to do next. Suddenly , I felt a soft and gentle tap on my shoulder , a sweet smiling girl looking at me . Since I had no friends in that class, immediately I agreed to work with her .That day onwards ,

Comments :

Note your tenses - you need to be consistent.

Sentence structure needs improvement. Since you are typing, it is much easier to correct your own errors.

Two Paragraphs From The Book By An Appreciated Author:

"Just talk about how you're feeling right now. You know, with college admission letters coming this week and everything."Vanessa Abrams squinted into the camera and adjusted the lens so Blair's jade-and-Swarvski-crystal chandelier earrings were in frame .It was a balmy April afternoon and the park was a madhouse .Behind them a group of senior boys from St. Jude's chased a frisbee up the terraced steps overloonking Bethesda Fountain , swearing and tackling one another in a frenzy of pent-up pre-college admission stress.

Around the perimeter of the fountain lay sprawled the perfectly tanned and manicured bodies of upper east side high-school girls , smoking cigarettes and rubbing their legs with the lastest Lancome tan invigorator, while the winged bronze lady in the center of fountain gazed down on them forgivingly.

title:I made a mistake in telling her my secret

Introduction :

-just step into the working society

-being bullied as I was new

-came my"saviour"

Para 1

-describe the close relationship with the "saviour"

-felt that he can be trusted, told him the biggest secret

Para 2

-one day , reach the office realised my secret has been revealed

-how I found out?

-felt betrayed

Para 3

- spent the whole day thinking , what to do next

-decide to resigned to save myself from more embarrassment

Para4

- Few months later . knew that "saviour" got promoted

- if i have not resigned , i will be the one being promoted

- from that day onwards , decided not to believe in anyone except my own family

conclusion

-people are selfish

-may harm others to achieve what they want

Comments :

A simple plot - how well you write will determine what marks you get. You haven't revealed your secret yet - I hope you don't intend to keep it secret. The markers need to know your secret so as to assess how relevant your other facts and part of the story are.

Summary points for 2003 paper

-cheap metals to make coins

-with state guarranted their value

-a hole bored to allow coins to be strung together

-with recognized shape and design

-increase in trade

-for convience, a subsititude payment -banknotes

-use throughout chinese history

-eastern europe mined the silver and gold in significant amount -earn reputation

-foundationslaid by chinese and european

-great value

-coins now not make from precious metal. made from copper cheap based -prevent any forms of imitations

-buying power determined with an offical mark on it

-modern banknote with ofical guarantee to their value

-production in leading cites flourished

Write about an occasion when a furious argument took place , based on a case of mistaken identity

Jane had recieved insider information that there was going to be a sale at a factory located at Jurong. It was going to be a warehouse sale selling branded goods like LV, Gucci and Armanis. As Jane and Mary have always been materialistic, they were prepared to go hungry for days to buy a branded LV bag or Chanel shoes. This time, the warehouse sales was definitely not a chance to be missed for Jane and Mary. They had planned to go together the minute it was open. However, an urgent matter cropped up and Mary was unable to go with her, even though she was extremely reluctant to miss such a chance.

So, on the first day of the sales, Jane went to the factory alone. The moment she stepped into the building, she was quite disappointed that a factory sale for branded goods could not afford to pay cleaners to clean up the area. The place was filled with boxes of unopened goods stacked untidily and pieces of bubble wraps could be seen everywhere. She sighed and stepped over the mess, and entered the lift which was just as messy.

Just then her phone rang and she took out her pink Nokia phone and answered. She was shocked when the calller shouted and demanded Jane not to avoid them and give back the money immediately. She answered hesitantly, 'You've got the wrong number.' The caller said angrily, 'I've got the wrong number? Stop lying, you sneaking thief!' He added, 'I will hunt you down and get back the money you stole from me, witch! I know where you are now.' Jane started to tremble as the tone in the man's voice was full of hatred. 'I know you're in Jurong. I'm coming to get you.' were the last words from the man, before he hanged up and there was only the sound of the dial tone.

Jane started to worry. Did the man know? Did he know that she had taken it? She shook her head as though to clear away the doubts, decided to go home instead. She was too flustered to think about shopping now, and besides, didn't the man say that he knew where she was? She didn't want to chance it and going home was the best option, the safest one.

On the bus back, thoughts of the phone call kept running through her head and she kept her eyes peeled for any suspicious men who might be the caller. When she finally reached her bus stop. Her phone rang again ,this time before she took out her phone, the caller

1a)The rowers has tried their best . (not good enough. Need to be more detailed.)

b)The white light flashing off the water is too bright for the villagers. (No)

c)The villagers feel nervous. (No)

2)They will definitely be baised (SP), siding own villagers (No)

3)The two consequences were people engaging in fights and quarrels causing injuries and unhappiness. (which comes first - fights or quarrels?)

4a)The word is"altercation".

4b)He swung the eku vigorously, caused the sand to fly around. (good answer)

4c) ???

4d)The man uses his eku to throw sands(sand, not "sands") at the rowers engage(d) in the fight . (and what happened?)

4e)He did it without having himself getting hurt . (No.)

5)The author is trying to say those learning martial arts should use it in the correct purposes like protecting oneself or prevent people from fighting and not to use it to harm people. (Answer is right but grammar and structure a problem. Please rephrase.)

6)They wrere trained to perform to people and not to for their own use. (No.)

7a)The first way is to add precautionary movements and the second way is to have limit targets during training.

7b)

8)During danger, you will be able to know your own abilities.

9)

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1)People paint on mulberry bark and the walls of the cave.

2)Producing real paper is much cheaper and larger quantities than Egyptian parchment.

3)Stepping on a piece of paper is forbidden during that time shows that .

4)

5)The word is"advent".

6) Hemp and linen rags were used to make paper with quality like strenght and purity.

7)

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