FREE WRITING ACTIVITY

This is a free-writing exercise. Write a paragraph (not exceeding 200 words) on any topic you like. Please be serious about this writing activity as I need to know exactly your personal style of writing. Do not cut and paste - I need to read a genuine piece of your own writing. You can start writing below.

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The Dark Night

"Oh great!" Guess I am trap for the night. The car is gone, what other solutions could appear better then search for help. The road seems darker then usual and it seems impossible to find help from anyone. This place probably has no one stepping foot for years.

"Ah found it!" Luck seems to be on my side for the day at least. I knock on the door of an old house, wishing someone would give an answer to my help as quick as possible. The door opened, i saw a man standing and wore a hat, his face was covered by a scarf. I could not see his face properly, but i heard through his soft tone: "come in!"

I went in with a smile in return, not daring to ask any question why is he covering his face. I sat down in the house's main room. I was serve gently with tea. I gathered away my shyness for the first time and decided to take a gup of tea before asking for help. However when i was abouut to have my tea, I saw the men taking off his scarf I saw his reflection in the surface of the cup of tea.

I was shock, he has four eyes and his face was just like an egg without any mouth of nose. "Ah help!"

Comments :

You try too hard, like many of your friends. Your story doesn't flow well - too many questions asked when the reader reads your story. If you don't mind, I would like to use your story to share with the class my feelings.

Title: 5(a) Running Away

Introduction :

Running away was never any solution to problems. Especially when you are running away from school.

Para 1

-This was never a good school year.

-No subjects were of my interest as i didn't do well in any.

-Journey of school runaway begins.

Para 2

-Caught by teacher in the running journey.

-Many problems arise: (i) Detention and suspension classes receive.

(ii) School work and results drop drastically.

Para 3

-Teacher seems to look at me differently.

-Panting for time to study secretly to achieve back my results.

-Succeeded in the end.

Conclusion

-Running never solves any problem

Comments :

It is your responsibility to complete whatever work I set. And I always give students a reasonale timeframe to do my work. Please complete this ASAP.

Nov 2003 summary

>Cheap Metals were use to make coins.

>New currency value guranteed by govenment.

>Coins identified by shape and design.

>Coins invention promote trade and business

>Eastern Europe-emergence of gold and silver coins.

>China introduced banknote as new currency and value guranteed by state.

>Banknote became more common and wide,

>More convenient to carry large sums of money.

>Govts forced to mealt and re-issue cheap coins.

>Metal coins of price value became collection.

>Coins collected due to its precious metal (material)

>Money resulted trading prosperity in eastern european cities.

>Resulted modern financial system and currency today.

>Banknotes and coins today is authorised by state stamp to prevent imitation.

>Modern currency resulted from chinese invention of banknotes. 15pts for summary & 117words

Index No : 28

Name : XXX

3 Good sentence/starters for sentences :

(i)A mixture of...

(ii)Rain and shine become legend.

(iii)Today the soft spoken.

3 Good phrases to "borrow"

(i) After sustaining a broken ribs.

(ii)His passion stems from the belief.

(iii)Legendary for gruelling intemsity.

Nov2004: Qn2. Write about an occasion when a furious argument took place, based on a case of mistaken identity.

This occasion was never a particular memorable one especially not to me as. It begins in a usual school week as I could remember, i was going on my way home when school was over. When i reach the bus-stop that brings me back home. I waited there for the bus, it took me longer than usual for the time to wait.

When the bus came to my view I felt desperately relieve as it seems ages for me to wait for the bus. I sat foot finally on the bus where I paid my bus fee, although I need to stand without a seat in the bus as it was crowded with its carried passengers still felt very relieve as I could finally go home and have my rest after a very long day. This was when where the furious argument took place between me and another passenger which will soon come in view.

The bus soon reach the next bus-stop, a man of age probably fourty entered the bus panting to catch his breathe pehaps due to the reason that he must have ran quite some distance to reach the bus-stop so as to catch this bus from the previous bus stop. The man who entered seems to be staring at me for a long while when he suddenly couldn't control himself when he said :" you! " Everyone looked at us suddenly and without having any time for any reaction, the man push me down and shouted: "its you that push me down just now in the previous bus-stop!" Without waiting for my chance to spoke, I was push down by a slam in a next moment. This time i mange to get my grip and stand up without being slam down again. I gave a loud shout and both of us landed in a shouting match. Fortunately there was some school mates in the bus who knew me in school, who held me back. These action indeed had save me from tarnishing the name of my school.

When the bus stops in the next bus-stop, my school mates and me together left the bus without a moment of thoughts. When we were down, they said: "what were you doing you could have get yourself expelled just for them. I felt awkward, but I manage to return them a thanks of remorse for saving me from the depths of getting our school name down and trouble.

1.(a) The rowers use all their strengh(SP) to move as fast as they could. (OK)

(b) The sun was glaring at them. (No)

(c) They were very ancious(SP) about the result of the race. (OK)

2. Both judges from both sides would be buyers(SP-pse check your spelling) over the results of the match. (Under what circumstances?)

3. It led to the fight between two groups of people between both villages. (OK) It change the old traditional spirit of particpating

in the race. (No)

4.(a) The word is altercation. (Yes)

(b) He used the eku to swipe away the sand. (No)

(c) He manage to move although the two groups were arguing and fighting against each other. (No)

(d) He created a whirlwind of sand which hindered heir visions to put an end to the fight. (No)

(e) There was (S-V) no casualties.

5.The author hopes that the practitioners of martial arts in modern times will have a fair race and sportsmanship, he also hopes that if any simliar fight broke out, someone sensible will stop the fight.

6.They considered to be

7.(a)

(b)

8.

9.

10.(1)

(2)

(3)

(4)

(5)

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